 Pretty happy with the inking on this page. Not too thrilled with the layout. I think it needs to be spatialized. I should be more in the foreground, the casket farther off. It all looks smushed together right now, and the parts don't quite relate.
Pretty happy with the inking on this page. Not too thrilled with the layout. I think it needs to be spatialized. I should be more in the foreground, the casket farther off. It all looks smushed together right now, and the parts don't quite relate.
Here's my Larry King sketch:

