I think this page came out nicely. It was drawn much later in the working process as it was not part of the original plan. Later, after sketching out most of the book, I decided I needed something that better explained parts of my relationship to my dad. And I also needed a way to introduce my dad's cancer. So I combined these in a page that takes place on my drive back to the airport after Jane's funeral.
I think the page works well enough considering how much information it has to convey. It might be information overload, though. I'm not sure a single page should contain this much information.
But I don't know. I'm also not sure I like the different font in the speech bubbles. I do like the drawing, though.
Here's the original sketch to which the finished page adheres fairly closely:
